Hey Skyla Great Diamante poem. I really like how it has a neon strip bachround to it, It really makes it pop out to me. I also like have you have used exciting language in it. Maybe next time you could add a bit of a longer description to it to say what a Diamante poem is. But over all I liked it. Bye for now, Pyper
Hi skyla
ReplyDeleteMy name is Bianca and i am from glenbrae school. I really enjoyed reading your diamante poem about pupies. Keep up the good work and keep blogging
Hey Skyla
ReplyDeleteGreat Diamante poem. I really like how it has a neon strip bachround to it, It really makes it pop out to me. I also like have you have used exciting language in it.
Maybe next time you could add a bit of a longer description to it to say what a Diamante poem is.
But over all I liked it.
Bye for now, Pyper