Thursday 12 March 2020

today we have done a Diamante poem
we had to chose something we wanted to write about and i picked a puppy.

2 comments:

  1. Hi skyla

    My name is Bianca and i am from glenbrae school. I really enjoyed reading your diamante poem about pupies. Keep up the good work and keep blogging

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  2. Hey Skyla
    Great Diamante poem. I really like how it has a neon strip bachround to it, It really makes it pop out to me. I also like have you have used exciting language in it.
    Maybe next time you could add a bit of a longer description to it to say what a Diamante poem is.
    But over all I liked it.
    Bye for now, Pyper

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